Dargquon Ql'deleodna

i feel really sorry for you, i havent experienced anything like that , except one time my sisters freind who was also a friend of mine, was killed in an ...

wow.... that sucks.... sorry to hear that....

nice poem, happy ending depressing type beginning, good job. one question, is this based on an event in your life......

"no i mean as he literally is dying, on the floor his life blood pouring out" into your goblet i thought ; "and who said you were the bad guy, ...

dude, its not over, hes gonna post more too it, he is probably posting it as he is weriting it.

yea ive got an invisible mustang gt 05' if you like drawing check out this drawing competition held by a guy named sponson light, we need more people to go ...

dude, this story rocks!!! there were a few minor grammar mistakes, here is one that particularly bothered me " He quickly looked over to the man on the bed to ...

heyy, welcome to the yws. i can draw pretty well too, i can also sing well.. (i think lol), i cant dance, but i can cook well... i like to ...

yea the mall is for people with money... wich i have none.... i just got invited to go to the mall like on saturday... i have no idea what happens ...

ahhhhhh... this sqrews up my computer, im never coming to this again..... you ruind my computer.. lagggggggg

hey, welcome to the yws, um yea i write; but only when my imagination slaps me in the face and tells me too (literally it takes allot of inspiration) but ...

this kinda sounds allot like LOTR because of the last stand agains the huge horde of death.... but i thought it was good, but it was just a jumble of ...

this is very well written and it reminds me allot of the book called The Speed of Darkness , it seems a allot like that story. over all a little ...

wow, very very cool beginning, he is now in hell, cuz he's dead, i like this story it for some odd reason puts happier thoughts in my head.... oh whell ...

hmm... interesting story, well written, i didnt see to many grammer mistakes, only a couple here and there. but otherwise good job.